Aug 8, 2013

Age No Bar - 55 Fiction !

I love you so. He said earnestly. Just give me one chance.
Look at our age difference !
Loves knows no age, and you’re an adult at 23.
And you are too .....
She stopped. Unwilling to hurt his feelings.
Dejected he walked away.
He’s got loads of spunk for a 12 year old. She thought amused. 



37 comments:

  1. I've been reading these '55 fiction' bits for quite some time now... and I want to ask: Is this some sort of a short story that is ultra short? Are there any rules in it?

    Arvind Passey
    www.passey.info

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    1. Its micro fiction - you need to write in in 5 words. The tutorial on Write Tribe by Vidya will tell you more about it !

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  2. yes saw a lot of that during my time, my colleagues falling over teachers...by the way that's actually how long those kind of love stories last...
    -Ayush

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    1. Oh yeah ! I think a whole lot of boys in this age group fall for their teachers ! Its a part of the whole growing up thing !

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  3. Ha! Well of course perfectly executed the story and the boy :D :D I recall my mother telling me one such incident where a sixteen year old fell for her :P

    Richa

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  4. Well age is just a number...I would've asked the little boy to wait for a few years more ;) :P

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  5. hehe Nice twist! Look at the gall of the 12-year-old!

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  6. Ooh that 12 year old is going far in life ...

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  7. Just 12 more years and he'll be all grown up :p

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    1. yes ! But I suppose its a long wait for the poor fellow !

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  8. Young love :) Beautifully written.

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  9. I myself had such experiences :P but it was never serious
    Good one

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  10. He needs to concentrate on his studies.

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  11. Yep, he sure has spunk! Loved it.

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  12. A bit too grown up for a 12 year old?Isnt it ?

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  13. A proud Dilliwala. Abhi se hi eve teasing shuru. Such kids are bound to go too far in life.

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  14. As they say, age is just a number. Lucky u! Mushy:)Lovely post

    Cheerz
    Vishal

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  15. :D I wasn't expecting the man to be a boy. :P
    Lovely 55er.

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