Oct 8, 2010

Autumn Leaves - Haiku



Autumn leaves flutter down
 like tired souls
at the end of their lives


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26 comments:

  1. Yes, like tired souls. Beautiful.

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  2. words can describe...true here..you described their lives ! Lovely :)

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  3. @all - thanks and welcome to my blog !

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  4. i hope that when my time comes i flutter down...smiles. nice magpie.

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  5. And here you have captured their spirits...

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  6. The essence of the leaf, and it's journey down, fluttering.

    Nice haiku

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  7. Tired souls indeed. Nice Mag...Love and Light, Sender

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  8. beautiful retiring souls.
    cool Haiku!

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  9. wow ruch its a beautiful haiku. Do you write in japanese too?

    latha

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  10. @latha - thanks ! No havent written any in Japanese yet !

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  11. @Swaram,vish,nimaruichi,carrie - thank you !

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  12. I'm not quite fluttering yet! I'm happily waving, though :)

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  13. I feel like a half-sunk ball trying to ponder on this, bobbing in and out, whether there is a deep statement on this observation. Maybe I got it or maybe not. Nice one, however. Thanks...

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  14. I so love this Haiku! And find an answering call in the one on my blog :)

    http://ushus.wordpress.com/2008/10/24/a-shower-of-haiku/

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