Oct 21, 2010

Haiku - Rejoice in Silence


Clicked by me at Palampur in March

As you walk in silence
through these mountains
can you hear your soul rejoice ?

12 comments:

  1. Yes definitely, this looks beautiful. I love to be in places decorated by god himself :)

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  2. Haven't seen anyone use the 6-4-7 haiku format before...

    You always follow this structure?

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  3. @Bhagwad - This is a slightly modified format used for english - the idea is to use 17 syllables in total,irrespective of how many syllables each line has.For writing in japanese I follow the traditional 5-7-5 format.

    @we cognize - Thanks !

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  4. Hmm - I haven't tried that before. Maybe I'll give it a whirl My own Haikus use the 5-7-7 format: http://www.bhagwad.com/blog/topics/haikus

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  5. Oh yes :)
    Beautifully written :)

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  6. @Swaram - Thank you ! you are too kind :)

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  7. Oh such a simple yet so very lovely Haiku. You are so right. I can actually feel my heart jumping with joy when my eyes see such beautiful sights..:D
    PS: Thanku for your last compliment at 'Fly Away Fly!'.
    The idiot that I am I hit the 'delete' instead of 'publish'. Extremely sorry and sad! :(

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  8. @Vibhuti - Thanks and welcome here !
    dont worry about the comment :)

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  9. Peaceful picture and a lovely Haiku to go with it. Very nice.

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  10. Hmmpf! I hv nt been writing anything, but for the pics I post on Wednesdays and Thursdays too ;)

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