Nov 22, 2010

Haiku - First Bud


The first bud peeking out of the frost
 like a stranger
unsure of his welcome


(This Haiku has been written for Haiku Heights. This weeks Prompt word was Stranger)

11 comments:

  1. I think it may not even be bothered about the Welcome.. blooming is what matters.

    Yet, it is a beautiful haiku as beautiful as the rose here.. well done..

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  2. how nicely put...'unsure of it's welcome'...

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  3. So beautiful, sweet, and delicate. The rose is certainly a beautiful stranger in winter. Nicely written.

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  4. i m feeling cold....!!

    nice work ...keep going!!

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  5. Beautiful! I so loved the simile :)

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  6. @Ramesh - Thanks and welcome here !
    @Scribbler - Thank you !
    @Write Girl - Thanks and welcome!its always good to see blooms in winter !
    @vivek - thanks
    @Swaram - Thank you my dear !
    @alphabet world - Thank you
    @MM Teacher - thanks and welcome!

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  7. I can just feel how the bud must have felt peeking out! :)

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  8. very beautiful.. :) the imagery here is well stated!

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