Nov 3, 2009

55 Fiction - Winter Frost

The door slammed and she heard him leave.Loneliness and despair clutched at her heart like cold hands. She shivered, opened the door and stepped out. The first rose was peeping its way out of the almost- gone winter frost. The sun warmed her skin but her heart remained covered with a layer of ice.

6 comments:

  1. I am first! , Quite interesting! had me looking for insights! great writing, keep them coming.

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  2. @sri - Dont look for insights - its just fiction! :-)

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  3. Loved this 55 word fiction. Beautifully written!

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  4. very well written.....!Wish you were my daughters Liteacy teacher...!

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  5. @vinoo - thanks ! Thats some compliment :-)

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